Poetry That Breaks the Rules—and Works

Broken Rengay: Unruly Poetry by Nolcha Fox, Melissa Lemay, and Barbara Leonhard
(Prolific Pulse Press, 2025)

Melissa Lemay, who readers will recognize from Record of Dissent, is back with a new collaboration, and this one leans hard into play. Broken Rengay: Unruly Poetry is a quick, sharp collection co-written with Nolcha Fox and Barbara Leonhard, with a striking cover illustration by Lesley Scoble, that takes a poetic form rooted in Japanese tradition and shakes it awake.

The rengay—a modern adaptation of Japan’s ancient linked-verse forms—was created by Garry Gay in 1992. It’s a six-part collaborative poem, traditionally written by two or three poets who take turns building around a shared theme. You can think of it as jazz in verse. Each stanza riffs on what came before, shifting tone, mood, or image while keeping a thread that ties the whole thing together.

In this book, that thread runs wild. The trio keeps the bones of the form but bends everything else—the rules, the rhythm, the tone. Each poet brings her own style. Together, they create something that feels spontaneous but deliberate, lighthearted but layered. You can sense the trust between them, and that makes room for honesty, humor, and surprise.

Some poems read like a dare, others like confession. Some do both. The short form forces precision—every image has to count—and the shared authorship keeps it unpredictable. It’s not three poets trying to sound the same, but rather three distinct voices finding beautiful harmony through difference.

What makes Broken Rengay such a joy is how alive it feels. These poems don’t sit still. They turn, they wink, they occasionally bite. It’s collaborative writing that doesn’t feel forced, a reminder that poetry doesn’t have to be solemn to matter. Sometimes breaking form is the most faithful way to honor it.

At 32 poems, it’s a quick read, but one that lingers. You can flip through in a single sitting and come back later to notice new threads of connection running through it. And trust me, you’ll definitely want to come back, again and again. Whether you’re a poet, a reader, or just someone who likes watching language do cartwheels, this book delivers.

Broken Rengay: Unruly Poetry is available through Prolific Pulse Press and the usual online booksellers. Highly recommended for anyone who loves collaboration, brevity, and a little bit of rule-breaking done right.

—Nick Allison, Editor
Record of Dissent: Poems of Protest in an Authoritarian Age


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P.S. I won’t pick a “favorite” poem from this book, but I’ll just say I really loved They Won’t Let Us Back Again.


And just for fun — a review in rengay form.
(Technically not a true rengay, since I don’t have any fellow poets handy.)

Three poets walk into a form,
each one carrying a spark—
none of them bring a map.

Rules tremble,
then step aside.

Laughter spills into craft,
the kind that hides
real depth under mischief.

A pause,
a glance that lands heavier than expected.

They trade lines like secrets,
turning language
into a living thing again.

Read it once for the fun,
and again for the freedom.



16 responses to “Poetry That Breaks the Rules—and Works”

  1. Thank you, Nick, for your fine review and your rengay. I appreciate you for taking the time! Nolcha

    1. No problem, Nolcha! Thank you for such wonderful poetry!

      1. You’re welcome! Maybe we should try a 4-person rengay, if you’re up for it.

      2. Sure, sounds like fun!

      3. Great – I’ll get you included in the next one!

      4. Duh, silly me. Can you send me your email address?

        I’m at:

        nolchafox@yahoo.com

        Thanks!

  2. I agree! It’s a fun book!

    1. Indeed it is, Dawn!

  3. A wonderful review! It’s in my TBR stack.

    1. Thanks, Merril. My TBR stack is pretty intimidating these days… I feel you! But when you get to this one, I promise you won’t be disappointed!

      1. You’re welcome, Nick.
        Having too many books is a good problem to have though. 😊

  4. Such lovely words about Bro ken Rengay, I enjoyed the book very much too. “They won’t let us back again” is one of my favorites as well, I also mentioned it in my review, that is nice. Congratulations to Nolcha, Melissa and Barbara on this wonderful review !

    1. Hey there, Nicole. “They won’t let us back again” is great! And I’ll be sure to check out your review as well!

  5. A fine review of this wonderful anthology. I love your analogy with jazz. Thank you for my illustration credit 🙏

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